LIFE LOVE LUST, my new movie, is available for pre-orders in Lust Store. We will ship the dvds in 30 days, so as a special gift for my friends, fans and followers, if you use the word “LIFELOVELUST” as a discount voucher in the checkout you will get a 6 € (8 USD) reduction on the price.
And now I want you advice, specially if you are English speaker. We are still in the last steps of the cover designing process, so please tell how do you feel about these texts in the comments section of this post:
COVER
LIFE LOVE LUST
Eroticism, love, pleasure, lust, passion, sex… by Erika Lust
BACK COVER
LIFE: After finishing the day in the restaurant they both work in, a chef and a waitress have an incredible encounter to celebrate his birthday. LOVE: A fourty-something executive seduces a young man she sporadically meets in a city hotel. LUST: Lola uses all her sensual body to give an intense skin on skin massage to a shy and lonely woman, driving her to the most pure extasis. LIFE LOVE LUST are three erotic audiovisual jewels by the acclaimed director Erika Lust. This DVD also features two awarded short movies about fetishism: LOVE ME LIKE YOU HATE ME and HANDCUFFS.
Teaser here:
all I would recomend is allready written above. Looking forward to your new film. Kinky greetings from Berlin and the whole team of Schwarzer Reiter
I would suggest that the word “sporadically” be replaced with “casually”. I also agree with Destin Gerek suggestions.
thank you erika!!great song.great movies!!
1/ Cover:
I wouldn’t repeat “love” and “lust” from the title. I think the second line should be a sentence – another list undermines the title. How about
“An exploration of passion, eroticism and pleasure by Erika Lust”
2/Life:
A chef’s birthday gift from his colleague at work.
(still a bit clunky?)
3/ Love:
An encounter between experience and youth.
4/ Lust:
A FULL body massage.
(in the original, I think “exstasis” should be “ecstacies”)
Next sentence fine.
Last sentence:
“Also includes two acclaimed shorts by EL – …”
When the work is as good as yours, don’t overexplain it – the original texts all came over a bit apologetic.
Hope that helps
Paul
What’s the song playing during closing credits of the film (not teaser)?